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BrianxDome

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You animation was good and so was your audio, but

*I'm suspicious of where the banana came from too...

You can work on your audio a little bit but other than that this was really good and I can say my interest has been peeked so I look forward to what else you've got, AWSOME WORK this was really good and funny.

HalfCrackedAudio responds:

Than you for the review and complements my dude, it means a lot. If you don't mind me asking, when you mention the audio do you mean the folio sound fx, the voice acting, or in general like the overall mix? Id love to know because I want the next one to be as perfect as possible XD Once again i'm glad you liked it dude :)

Holy crap this was smooth! This was really well done. My only problems were with some sound effects like when they moved etc. and also the walking animation but I don't work with stop motion so I'm guessing even small details take up a lot of time so I can look past that. I enjoyed this very much! AWSOME WORK! :P

This is the kind of stuff I'm excited to see from you, your work is superb man, Your animation is amazing , your audio is super strong and your message is stronger! AWSOME WORK! I look forward to what you got next for us!

It was good and your animation was smooth, the problem is just with the audio and I'm not talking about the lack of voice actors, it just felt like the same looping music started to sound like white noise. In this case the eerie sound worked for the situation but I feel it still needs more variation than the same loop getting louder. Either way your expressions were good and it didn't feel like a " just because" post. so AWSOME WORK and KEEP GETTING BETTER! :P

cecameron responds:

Thanks so much! Audio is definitely my weakness, so I hope to improve on that in the future.

Some of your work are my favorites, Good Luck I hope you are successful!

The animation is clean but boring, and the sound effects sounded off. It was fluid though and I can give you that. :P

LUCA-FATTORE responds:

You are right !
Thanks...I will do better on my next.
Regards.

Congrats to 64bitsanimation for getting best of all time! You deserve it! AWSOME WORK! :P

It was smooth and fluid except for when the characters began talking like when the mother's head stood still when she was talking. If you could make the whole thing like the hand in the beginning reaching for the clock, this would be amazing. Don't make your characters too stiff when they walk or move, because when she was running the shoulders and torso would be moving/ twisting much more than they had been. Even if a character is standing still they're not truly "still" they're breathing moving their eyes, maybe chewing, fidgeting their hand or foot. I'm not saying you didn't do that with all the characters like when she grabbed onto the other girl you did good on making sure they didn't stay still to long like when she quickly pulled her closer when she got more excited/motivated. One more thing some of your environment is a little off, by this I mean some things look a little flat/ rigid like the items on the table. Also you could work on some of the environment as in backgrounds, if backgrounds don't stay similar looking (as in style) through out the shots it takes away from the world . Though you did say it was practice and this is a really good way to improve, by actually doing! SO AWSOME WORK! :P

PatrickDomingo responds:

Thank you very much Sir BrianxDome for The Advise It's really helpful ill keep that in mind :)

(*Tears start pouring down face...) Why are we still here just to suffer?

In all seriousness this had really good animation and comedic value...

T-T, It's nothing a little Ammonia and Bleach can help you forget...

Here to eat ass and chew bubblegum. Ya like my art, why not commission me, that'd be pretty cool. From weird to sexy and everything in-between I'm your guy. <3

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